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Dramione-Yr3 The Rave 'n' ClawWARNING: Contains some sexual contact (for those who think sitting on each others laps and think that is).

The clock tower tolled seven as students poured out of their common rooms and headed for the great hall. Students dressed in dark blue stood by the hall and collected in tickets and ushered people in. Above the door an enchanted banner hung in colours of blue and white, a bird flitting across it pulling along the words: Rave 'n' Claw Disco.

Students poured into the room in pairs, groups or alone. Tight dresses, long dresses, sweeping dresses and a huge array of fashion showed in the room. House colours showed prominently whilst other c

Dramione-Yr 3 QuidditchDraco stormed into the boy's changing rooms, put on his robes and walked sullenly out to the pitch. He noticed Becky whizzing about on her broom and slowly mounted his own broom, brought by his father obviously.

Pulling the practice snitch out of his robe pockets he threw it into the air and raced after it.

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Meanwhile Hermione had raced after Draco and was now sat in the stands hidden in the shadows watching as the Slytherin team practiced.

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It worked, she thinks I hate her. I hate this. I hate having to pretend to be someone else to keep everyone else safe. I hate that I can't show he how I feel. She should try my life.

Draco was

Dramione-Yr 3 by the lakeThe sun hung just above the horizon, the rays reflecting on the lake. The giant squid floated near the top of the water as the last of the day passed by.

It was at this time that Draco was walking down from the castle down to the quidditch pitch for some practice. As he walked past the shore he noticed a lone figure sat down by the shore with their feet in the water and a book on their lap. As he stared at the figure they brought a hand up to their face and moved their hair back.

Drawn to the figure he neared the shore whilst remaining out of sight. The figure moved and Draco froze. He saw the bushy hair and the unconscious movement of her

Dramione-Yr 1 the first LessonIt was their first lesson and Hermione sat at a table with Becky, with Ron and Harry at the table beside them. In the day or two they had been at school Hermione had got to know them and they were on good terms though they weren't very close.

She hadn't spent much time with Becky as she'd spent an awful lot of time in the Slytherin Common Room. As they chatted amicably while they waited for their Professor to arrive Hermione noticed Becky's eyes sliding past her to where Draco sat behind them. Although she tried to ignore it she couldn't help but look at Becky. She had changed since the sorting. At the sorting she had seemed so fresh, innoc

Dramione-Yr 1 the SortingDraco watched Hermione quickly clamber from the boat and head up the path towards the school. Following her silently he watched her look around in amazement at the huge castle. As they entered the school he noticed a black-haired boy with a scar on his forehead and a ginger boy stood at the front of the crowd. Pushing his way through to the front of the crowd he confronted the two.

Hermione watched the spectacle in bemused wonder as Draco showed another side to his charming self. Silence fell as a woman in green robes and matching hat swept into the room. Gesturing for them to follow she led them through the huge oak doors.

Hermione walked

Dramione-Yr 1 boats to schoolThe gleaming scarlet train pulled to a stop at a station. The students swarmed out onto the platform, every one of them in school uniform. The first years made their way to the end of the platform near a vast lake.

Everyone gathered around a huge man holding a lantern. His face was covered by a black beard and his hair reached his shoulders. As Hermione reached the crowd she didn't notice Draco watching her intently from the back of the group.

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The man, whose name was Hagrid, led them to the shore of the lake once the platform was free of the older students.

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Vaporeon half-humanby ~November-phoenix

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Drew this originally, only got a crummy paint so took me 4hrs to do even though it isnt that good really, any advice is appreciated

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~catmadangel97 Jul 21, 2010 Student Photographer

Hmm... I quite like this. However, like Amber said, I think the hands and feet are a bit small compared to the body.
Good work otherwise!

~November-phoenix Jul 24, 2010 Hobbyist Writer

Yeah the hands and feet are out of size, I know that, I'm not gonna deny it lol

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~mystic-dragon556 Jul 6, 2010 Hobbyist General Artist

ok I've never properly critiqued someone before but I'll just use the knowledge I know, now sorry if it seems harsh, but it's good stuff to keep in mind.

Right let's work from top to bottom. The head shape is good - you also got Vaporeon's anatomy correct, though so they're in proportion, maybe the head fins would be slightly bigger? I don't know, that's more personal preference-.
The waist is good and the chest area isn't gravity defying. The hands are probably slightly small, but hands have never been easy for anyone, leg shape is another difficult thing to master, maybe looking at basic female anatomy may help. The shins probably wouldn't make that shape, it's very unnatural so it can't lead smoothly into the ankles, however the fins around the ankles may have thrown you off and could've distracted you from that point, I'm not sure. You have got the shading in the correct places however it's not very smooth, I know paint is quite difficult to get smooth shading with but cell shading -if you don't know what that is search it- comes in handy with paint, also very, very gradually darkening the colour and layering it gives it a much more smooth effect. You have given the skin a shiny effect however I don't think the highlights -where light would be hitting- would have shadow on it aswell. I can understand if it was a paler colour in the light, but because it is white it shows something it very smooth and wouldn't have shading underneathe it. Otherwise, good work :thumbs up

~November-phoenix Jul 8, 2010 Hobbyist Writer

kk, thanks for the help, it should come in handy!

~November-phoenix Jul 19, 2010 Hobbyist Writer

yeah, I've now started editing, should be on in a couple of weeks ! ;D

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